Chapter 23: Hobart Town (December 1842)
“Ew, mate. You’ve got the stink of death on you.”
“I’d
laugh. But you’re too close to the truth.” Mac stood by the water pump in Doc
Morrell’s back yard.
“You
got lucky, man,” said Mackey. “You being assigned out to Doc Morrell. ‘Tis
better than being out in the bush. Bet you thought you were going to the dogs.”
“What happened? Nobody will tell me.”
“Talk
to Doc Morrell. He knows.” Mackey finished filling two large jugs of water. “Best
clean up afore you see him.”
Mac
took a quick wash at the pump and presented himself to Doc Morrell in his front
office.
The
morning light showed every line on Doc Morrell’s face. “You’ve got a few new
bruises, I see.”
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Posting this makes me wonder what people will say, especially since there's no blurb. Oh, well. Here's the draft blurb for the book cover:
In 1842, Deidre
Scott undertakes a perilous four-month journey to follow Mac McDonnell, the man
she loves, a fisherman who has been sentenced to seven years for
resisting evictions on an island in the Orkneys, Scotland. The story begins
just as they reach the dreaded penal colony, Van Diemen’s Land (present day
Tasmania, Australia).
WIPpet Weds, dreamed up by K. L. Schengel, asks writers to post a little something that relates to the date. So for July, that might be 7 words, 7 sentences, 7 paragraphs, etc. Then jump to the LINKY on her site, share, and read on.
Hobart Town, Mount Wellington (Wikipedia) |
Hooray, new WIPpeteer! I like this snippet; I enjoy the style of the dialogue, and it made me want to know more. So glad you posted more information. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and commenting. It's fun to try out this weekly sharing of wip, and I'm looking forward to reading what others have written as well.
DeleteI love period pieces and yay for new WIPpeter! "The smell of death" ... it really does have a distinct smell.
ReplyDeleteThank you for such a positive welcome. I'll check out your site as well!
DeleteWelcome Beth! Nice WIPpet and I love the premise for the story. The time and setting has so much potential!
ReplyDelete*huge round of applause* Hi Beth! And thanks for finding me on Facebook. Love having new WIPpeteers join the ranks. I just hope you'll find it more fun than the ranks Mac is going to be joining. Lovely inaugural excerpt to share.
ReplyDeleteAh ha! So is this scene just after the fight with Constable Johnson?
ReplyDeleteI really like the premise. When will it be out?
Hello, Regi. Thanks for commenting. This was my first post on WIPpet (and I'm also on ROW80).
DeleteMy goal is to have either Standing Stones or Years of Stone out by the fall. I'm on the last-I-hope edit of Years of Stone (the snippet for WIPpet). Actually, this scene comes just before the fight with Constable Johnson, but I plugged in the blurb for the book, so worse follows.
I'm a self-published author. My first book of short stories (The Mermaid Quilt & Other Tales) was to practice the art of self-publishing and to rev up to self-publish my historical fiction. Somewhere I read that putting two books out relatively close to each other will build audience. What do you think?
Thanks for the warm welcome to WIPpet!
According to the self-publishing "guru" I follow, the trick is to make sure readers know where to find you and to put out series of books. The two book thing would probably work in conjunction with that. It would give people something to read so your writing stays fresh in their minds while you crank out the next book. I'm not "there" yet, though, so I'm only passing on info. and speculation. =0)
DeleteIt's nice to have you join us. =0)
Yay, glad you joined the WIPpeteers! I loved the exchange of dialogue between the characters and the accents. Sounds like there is a lot the two main characters have to go through just for the CHANCE to be together again. Yeesh! ;)
ReplyDeleteI've read some of your other posts about Van Diemen's Island before, Beth, but this is the first time I've read any of your fiction revolving around it--I can't help but wonder if you'll be somehow involving the point where Lady Franklin's husband is lost, but that could easily overwhelm the story of Diedre and Mac... though the backdrop of the large prison population in Tasmania itself is going to be intense enough to possibly do that too. Sounds neat!
ReplyDeleteI love the dialogue in this piece. It has an Australian ring to it without being too cliche.
ReplyDeleteThe blurb also catches my attention, though I do shudder a bit at any and all mentions of Port Arthur prison.
Welcome to the WIPpeteers! :D
Welcome to the WIPpet side! :) Glad you joined this. Really enjoyed reading your snippet and you are super kind (kinder than me) by providing the blurb. Sounds like an interesting book.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the WIPpeteers Beth! I always like anything historical and I liked this extract - great opening line with 'the stink of death'. Really helpful to have the blurb along with it too and it's an intriguing idea.
ReplyDeleteSorry I'm so late in saying this - but welcome to WIPpet Wednesday! This sounds like an interesting story and I look forward to reading more :)
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